Feedback & Planning

I will improve my grade by:


Planning:

Do three L.I.I.AR analysis of magazine front covers, not just one.
Have a better organisation of my location, actors and costume/props.
Add comments to the drafts of my front covers.
Make the presentation of my planning and research easier to see and understand.
Manage my time better.



Construction:

Take a better variety of pictures, changing props and different shots.
Make the pictures more appropriate to my magazine genre.
Have a better selection of mise-en-scene (colour, figure, lighting, objects and settings)
Manipulate the images better (cropping, resizing ect.)
Better use of language - more accurate.
Evaluate the lay out of my magazine; make it more realistic.
Use a variety of fonts and texts size.
Use ICT better for the set task (photoshop)



Overall I will change the layout of my magazine front cover/blogger to make everything more clear, the photos (to use a variety of mise-en-scene, framing and editing), add comments and information to the posts (add why I've changed things or why i've done the photo in the way I have), change the photos to make it more as first initial ideas/plans and to link into the genre of the magazine more, manage my time better and make everything more clear and concise to make my blog and magazine link into the genre of my magazine.

I want to have it all done by 14th February at the latest, most done by the 1st February.